Thursday, January 8, 2009

dream farewell

she told me last night
that the beetles were gone.
she tried to see where they went,
blinded, squinting at the sun.

as i gaze at the distance
the mile-high window
admonishes the light
blinding. inpenetrable.

i wonder where they could be.
and if she's lost her faith.
her faith in me.

i bet her love for the world.
but i believe i will return.

2 comments:

Edu said...

Very beautiful your poetry.
One Kiss

Rory Gibbens said...

Does mile-high refer to airplane or a city on a mountain?
I am little confused by the mention of beetles; perhaps threading that throughout the poem instead of mentioning once would be a way to connect it to other aspects of the poem.